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Wading Stork

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Description

A White Stork (Ciconia ciconia)
Image size
2184x3540px 3.4 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D3100
Shutter Speed
10/2000 second
Aperture
F/10.0
Focal Length
165 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Oct 1, 2011, 3:18:17 PM
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Even though we can see the stork very clearly and well, the photo is not holding too much artistic value. The massive blue imperfection is highly distracting and the angle is very common. I think that the stork is a nice subject itself, and this scene could have been really good with an interesting composition, a more interesting angle on things and maybe framed up closer or further away, either to concentrate on detail, or show it's surroundings. As it stands - it's a good photo of the subject, however the background is a little cluttered.

The photo as it stands hasn't really got much artistic impact in my opinion, but it does depend on what you were trying to portray.

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